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Hi all. I wanted to let you know I'm using Labyrinth Lord Basic to create a series of one-page adventures. You can find them here: http://digitalorc.blogspot.com/2011/03/one-page-modules.html

I also publish some of my (not so good) art there. If you're looking for some art for some of your publications and you like what you see on my blog, shoot me a message.

BTW, I appreciate constructive criticism.

See you in the caverns!

I had a look, and "Brother's Keeper" looks good. My instinct is to say if each page is intended to be letter-sized or A4, it may be worth squeezing things up a bit to fit in a paragraph as introduction including for what levels of PCs the one page adventure is aimed at and an overview of what the adventure is about. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

I was just there because you posted a comment to my blog. Love it. And also love the fact that you are using your own artwork. I started trying to do that in Dyson's Dodecahedron and didn't actually have the balls to do it in issue 2, but am hoping to get some together for issue 3.

Thanks for the feedback. As you can see, I've taken your advice; reduced the font and included an introduction. Thanks!

Finished second one page adventure: [url] http://digitalorc.blogspot.com/2011/03/ ... ge_15.html[/url]

hartwell wrote:Finished second one page adventure: http://digitalorc.blogspot.com/2011/03/one-page-module-2-rites-of-passage_15.html

Ran my son through Rites of Passage. Good job on this adventure. He had a lot of fun and was successful.

so glad to hear it!